Some one check please

whether this design is ok to go premium.This is about a previously rejected item .i rebuild it.

No. I’m sorry but you have a LOT more work. Honestly I’d give up on this theme and try to improve your general skills, because there’s a lot wrong with this theme. (colours, layout, coding)

Never have marquees, they’re so 1990’s.

I wouldn’t download this even if it were free.

EDIT :

If you want to sell this as a script I’d seriously consider teaming up with someone for a design, or trying to search around for free templates you can sell it with. (provided the theme’s license allows it)

Why the hell would I be jealous of that monstrosity? Seriously, you’re the one who got rejected, not me.

Actually, this does have a use….You could put it on geocities!

Guys! Really? Marketslk was asking for friendly, honest advice. Thecodingdude gave honest (if a little harsh) advice. Absolutely no need to make it into a war.

But friend remember that rejected people are not under-skill.Even the great mathematicians like sir Albert Einstein was rejected at the school.They are people who see something that common fools don`t?And according to your reply you are certainly jealous at achieved people,not the rejected.

I think the most important thing to note is that we aren’t reviewers, so we can’t say whether it’s good enough or not, as only reviewers can make that call.

We can however comment on item itself, and I’ve been following this topic and know it got rejected before etc, but in all honesty I just don’t see any of the improvements. If I’m being brutally honest, I find the textures horrible, the text hard to read, the marque scrolls too fast and it’s just lacking polish.

The only way you will find if this is good enough is to resubmit it and get feedback from the item.

marketslk said
But friend remember that rejected people are not under-skill.Even the great mathematicians like sir Albert Einstein was rejected at the school.They are people who see something that common fools don`t?And according to your reply you are certainly jealous at achieved people,not the rejected.

Whether he’s jealous or not I don’t know (although I’d go with “not”) but this item’s quality is far from what it needs to be to get accepted into CC. Period. Instead of trying to find some “conspiracy” I suggest, for start, hiring a designer to make it look decent.

phpdude said
I think the most important thing to note is that we aren’t reviewers, so we can’t say whether it’s good enough or not, as only reviewers can make that call.

We can however comment on item itself, and I’ve been following this topic and know it got rejected before etc, but in all honesty I just don’t see any of the improvements. If I’m being brutally honest, I find the textures horrible, the text hard to read, the marque scrolls too fast and it’s just lacking polish.

The only way you will find if this is good enough is to resubmit it and get feedback from the item.

phpdude said
I think the most important thing to note is that we aren’t reviewers, so we can’t say whether it’s good enough or not, as only reviewers can make that call.

We can however comment on item itself, and I’ve been following this topic and know it got rejected before etc, but in all honesty I just don’t see any of the improvements. If I’m being brutally honest, I find the textures horrible, the text hard to read, the marque scrolls too fast and it’s just lacking polish.

The only way you will find if this is good enough is to resubmit it and get feedback from the item.

I agree with phpdude. Have a look at Dribbble for some inspiration. Look at some interfaces and take notes of what makes a design look good. Also, go to Webdesigntuts+ and read through some tutorials and articles.

marketslk, just watched around 5-6 threads from you within couple of days – all showing you are new to the marketplaces and community. Just spend few days to observe the files, trend, community and then you will no longer have too many questions / doubts. Just a friendly advice.